Jared - your camera work was really great. Super still, which helps convey loneliness. Mine was choppy. I wasn't used to the camera yet. Your emotion and color were great. Good work! I also liked the use of musical transition in visual.
I really liked the music, I feel like the rhythm of the music fit the tone and pacing of the video. Also I really liked how well the story was told and only having one person featured throughout the entire video. Good job conveying the emotion of being alone!
I liked the shot w/ the dark room where you can see just you through the doorway. That was a strong image. And I thought the shot of you on one side of the couch conveyed your emotion well. Good job.
This video was conveyed well. I really liked that towards the end of the video when the music from the record player mixed with the original music that was playing before the record player started. Overall I think that loneliness was very well portrayed. When we are left on our own we find ourselves bored and wanting some company and this video displays that well. Nice job.
I really enjoyed your video! It was well thought out and the music was pretty perfect. I really enjoyed the music choice, as well! It just felt like the end music should have gone a little bit longer. You had me wanting more of your piece!
I really enjoyed your shots and your use of the rule of thirds!
Lastly, this is just a small nit-pick but this the shots seem to have different lighting.. not by much, but just enough to notice!
This video was conveyed well. I really liked that towards the end of the video when the music from the record player mixed with the original music that was playing before the record player started. Overall I think that loneliness was very well portrayed. When we are left on our own we find ourselves bored and wanting some company and this video displays that well. Nice job.
The emotion of loneliness was expressed very well in this video. I really thought the doorway shot was an excellent shot and how it really isolated the subject. Also the close up shots of his facial expressions helped out as well.
The emotion of loneliness was expressed very well in this video. I really thought the doorway shot was an excellent shot and how it really isolated the subject. Also the close up shots of his facial expressions helped out as well.
I like that you kept the video short and simple, good choice of music also.
ReplyDeleteI loved the music in your video. I thought it went really well with your emotion. You also did a great job with your shots.
ReplyDeleteJared - your camera work was really great. Super still, which helps convey loneliness. Mine was choppy. I wasn't used to the camera yet. Your emotion and color were great. Good work! I also liked the use of musical transition in visual.
ReplyDeleteI thought you showed the emotion well, I also liked that it seemed you over came the loneliness at the end using the music.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the music, I feel like the rhythm of the music fit the tone and pacing of the video. Also I really liked how well the story was told and only having one person featured throughout the entire video. Good job conveying the emotion of being alone!
ReplyDeleteGood camera shots (especially the use of the doorway as a frame) and music - it really conveyed the emotion well.
ReplyDeleteI liked the shot w/ the dark room where you can see just you through the doorway. That was a strong image. And I thought the shot of you on one side of the couch conveyed your emotion well. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you showed the emotion, the music really fit the theme you were going for. Nice transition of the frames.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you showed the emotion, the music really fit the theme you were going for. Nice transition of the frames.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good way of showing loneliness. I liked how it was a narrative story, and it was really well done!
ReplyDeleteThis video was conveyed well. I really liked that towards the end of the video when the music from the record player mixed with the original music that was playing before the record player started. Overall I think that loneliness was very well portrayed. When we are left on our own we find ourselves bored and wanting some company and this video displays that well. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good way of showing loneliness. I liked how it was a narrative story, and it was really well done!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your video! It was well thought out and the music was pretty perfect. I really enjoyed the music choice, as well! It just felt like the end music should have gone a little bit longer. You had me wanting more of your piece!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your shots and your use of the rule of thirds!
Lastly, this is just a small nit-pick but this the shots seem to have different lighting.. not by much, but just enough to notice!
This video was conveyed well. I really liked that towards the end of the video when the music from the record player mixed with the original music that was playing before the record player started. Overall I think that loneliness was very well portrayed. When we are left on our own we find ourselves bored and wanting some company and this video displays that well. Nice job.
ReplyDeletelove the music!! Your video flowed very well!!
ReplyDeleteThe emotion of loneliness was expressed very well in this video. I really thought the doorway shot was an excellent shot and how it really isolated the subject. Also the close up shots of his facial expressions helped out as well.
ReplyDeleteThe emotion of loneliness was expressed very well in this video. I really thought the doorway shot was an excellent shot and how it really isolated the subject. Also the close up shots of his facial expressions helped out as well.
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